Considering all details...
It was dark and nice to watch but you really need to work on...
1. a play button
2. better drawing animation. (some people can draw well with a mouse!)
But kudos for...
1. story line
2. some sound effects
3. overall mood
Yea drawing with a mouse is easy but animating is really haaard D:
But thanks! I have a tablet now so no more excuses for me haha.
lame
the drawings were good, you get credit for that
the audio could have been funny, more points for TRYING to be funny
but the problem is it didn't move so it wasn't really an animation then, right?
although it did on some parts, it was just so simple and some kid could have done that.
nothing too great here.
Yeah I understand were your coming from, I for sure will work on movement more, its something im not totally familiar with but I also plan on having more time to work with future projects unlike this one.
Alice In Wonderland-Gory- 
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